Broken^Minded^Warrior

Thank you, Colt! Your crit is very helpful! (Seriously, it is!) Sorry about all the misspelled words... my brother turned off all of the spell checks... Also, welcome to YWS! ...

Just wrote this, too. Please tear it apart! Also, please comment! Thanks! :) When did you stop? When did you pop? Where will yo go? Do you even know? Dying, ...

Just now wrote this... Please review, criticize,tear apart, destroy, ect. and comment. THanks! :) Blessed be the name Of the Lord our God most high. Blessed be the name Of ...

Gooder! ^.^ That will satisfy all parties! (Better, actually.) Yes or No?

Pretty nice! Questions, questions.... Asside from some of the forced rhymes, all that needs fixing is... The capitalization and the punctuation. The only way that I could tell the difference ...

Wow... Just Wow... That was a good "Wow...", BTW. Only one suggestion, though. In this line, "To something called cancer" might look a little better as "To something called - ...

We've got DSL and Ethernet here, but we might as well have Dial-Up, 'cause the DSL hates me, (no joking, it really will go to extreme lengths just to not ...

Yayness, Poetry! XD Anyway, the only thing that I could spot that nobody mentioned was that you need to work on you stanza spacing. For example, She chose to walk ...

Well, for me, it would be the Holy Bible. It has demons and angels, it talks about dragons, it has war, kings, miracles, prophecies, gods, you name it. And it ...

Dang! Pretty sweet! The only thinga that I really saw was that one of the hands seemed kinda backwards... And, as the other two people said, it could be just ...

Wow... "Is it a crime not having the passion to pursue something you're very good at?" No. I am good at lots of things, but some of I totally don't ...

Pretty sweet, the way that this is crafted. Aside from what Fye said, one thing caught my eye. In "Most days, though, he was consumed by the silence, and her ...

Thanks for critiquing! I'll fix the mistakes that x0xGilmore Girliex0x pointed out. And yes, the italics did get messed up, and I'll try to fix those up, also! And if ...

OK, for the "Terrible Writing Prompts" contest, here's one on prompt #4. This probably won't be that good, 'cause this is last minute 'cause I mis-read the deadline, but here ...

Wow... Pretty sweet, scary, and so like this world today... Just one thing, though, asides from what the other people said: in "He never called her on the phone, Just ...